You disembarked in Damascus
Tired of the scenery
Tired of the company
Lost in the steam
As we pulled from the station
A lost cause in your heart
But the train journeys onward
And you are not here
The views are now breathtaking
And you are not here
The company is less tiresome
And you are in Damascus
I really like the repetition with the first and last lines, and how themes are revisited in such a small space. Really like the picture as well, complements the words perfectly.
Great work here.
Thanks. I appreciate it.